James Gülgeçer, PhD
Your writing is clear. Your argument isn’t. That’s why it’s not landing.I work with MSc and PhD students and researchers whose writing reads well at the sentence level but still receives feedback like:“This is difficult to follow”
“Your argument isn’t fully clear”
“This needs more development”The issue is rarely grammar.The problem tends to be that the central claim is unclear or sections are not doing enough analytical work. You probably also find that the structure does not fully meet what markers or reviewers are looking for.I identify where your writing is not working. I show you how to improve clarity, structure and overall coherence so your work is easier to follow and more convincing.
About
I hold a PhD from the University of Glasgow and am the author of Youth, Masculinity and the Labour Market (Routledge).Alongside my research, I provide editing services that focuses on improving clarity and structure in academic writing.I work directly with your existing draft to:- clarify your central claim
- improve the flow between sections
- strengthen the overall coherence of your workI will make your writing clearer, more structured and easier to follow.
Services
Argument Diagnostic (recommended starting point)£60A focused review of 1,000–2,000 words.I show you:- where your argument is unclear or underdeveloped
- how sections can be improved
- what changes will make the biggest differenceMost clients start here before moving to a larger piece of work.Proofreading and Language EditingFrom £40 per 1,000 wordsFor drafts that need to be clear, accurate and professionally presented.I can:- correct grammar and syntax
- improve clarity and flow
- ensure consistency in tone and expressionWhere needed, I also make light structural suggestions to improve readability.Dissertation / Thesis ReviewFrom £300For drafts where the material is strong but the writing doesn’t fully come together.I will:- identify where the overall argument becomes unclear
- suggest improvements to structure and organisation
- provide clear, actionable guidance you can apply immediatelyJournal Article ReviewFrom £150For drafts that are close to submission but not yet convincing.I focus on:- clarity of argument
- structure and sequencing
- how the paper will be read by reviewersAI-Assisted Draft RefinementFrom £80 per 1,000 wordsMany universities now allow the use of AI tools in the writing process.However, AI-assisted drafts often:- read fluently but lack clear structure
- rely on generic phrasing
- raise concerns during review or markingI work with these drafts to:- restore clarity and control
- ensure the argument is properly developed
- bring the writing in line with credible academic standardsThe aim is not to “hide” AI use, but to ensure your work is clear, coherent and defensible.One-to-One Research Mentoring
£80 per sessionFocused sessions on:- improving clarity and structure
- working through specific sections
- responding to supervisor feedback